You presented the work very well, it was confident and you covered just about everything. At the moment, however, it is a Pass. ~This is because, in order to access the higher mark bands you need to include, “reference to detailed illustrative examples.”
What I would recommend you do, as often as you can, is to have; a description of a technique; an example you have photographed/shot /edited yourself (to show you understand the technique); and an example from TV/film that then shows how the effect helps the narrative. This should help you access the Merits/Distinctions.
What I would recommend you do, as often as you can, is to have; a description of a technique; an example you have photographed/shot /edited yourself (to show you understand the technique); and an example from TV/film that then shows how the effect helps the narrative. This should help you access the Merits/Distinctions.
84.2% Rated within the top band (3 out of 3)
6.3% Rated within the middle band (2 out of 3)
10.5% rated within the lower band (1 out of 3)
top band: up beat and engaging thirty seconds well spent.
Middle band: I feel I didn’t see much in the way of T&C`s though the content itself was thoroughly enjoyable.
Lower band: I was most concerned with the unessacary copyright infringement.
Finally, you need to spend more time improving the commentary on narrative types and the analysis of the Scrubs clip. It is a great clip that should enable you to show how the shot types and angles help give a sense of location as well as enabling the characters to appear in a number of different places very quickly (enhancing the comedic effect).
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